"TOEIC Part 7" Questions 4-7 refer to the following emails.
To: Ethan@jnu.com, Lily@ jnu.com
From: Sophie@ jnu.com
Subject: Updated Presentation Draft
Attachment: Project_Presentation_Draft_v2.pptx
Hi Ethan and Lily,
I’ve attached the revised presentation draft based on our recent discussion. I tried to incorporate both of your perspectives, with selective visuals that support our data while keeping it engaging. Please take a look and let me know if there are any further adjustments you’d like. Could you send me your feedback by Friday, so we have time to make any final changes before our presentation? Thanks for your efforts and insights. Looking forward to your thoughts!
Best,
Sophie
To: Sophie@jnu.com
From: Ethan@jnu.com
Subject: Re: Updated Presentation Draft
Hi Sophie,
Thanks for sending over the revised draft. I can see you put a lot of thought into balancing the visuals and data, and I appreciate the effort. ----[1]---- However, I have a few concerns. ----[2]---- I feel that some of the visuals might still overshadow the depth of our analysis, especially in sections 3 and 5. ----[3]----
Would it be possible to make these adjustments? ----[4]---- Let me know if you'd like to discuss this further—I’d be happy to go over the details with you. Thanks again for all the work you've put into this!
Best,
Ethan